Vampires Don't Sparkle - Part 1

This is not a novella, but essentially just a screenplay in a different format. Anyone who wishes to read and critique it is welcome, but since it is not strictly related to the goals of the class I suggest you think of it as extra credit (i.e. I don't think it should count towards your 4 required critiques in the class). 

Part 1

If anyone has trouble viewing it let me know and I'll post a plain text version here.